
I dont like revising that much but I do it anyways, because the teachers tell me to do it. When I revise I stress out because I go back and read the paper that I wrote and I dont like any of it. It sucks so bad. But then I think to myself, well hey you dont have to change the whole thing. Then I go and do what I have to do. But when it comes right down to it, I usually change the whole thing because I didnt like the way it was written and the way it sounded when I read it out loud. The project 2 for me was a hard one. I was writing about Indian Culture in India referring to the movie Slumdog Millionaire but I decided that I really couldnt put my soul and heart into it because it wasnt a community that I was personally involved in. So I changed it, which comes with revising, and switched to the Body Modification community, but mainly focusing on tattoos, since the picture I used was of tattoos. I am pretty happy about what I wrote but I know it can be way better.
2 comments:
Aricka, I love the pics! They are always unique and interesting. You have inspired me to add pics to my blogs! And I also agree project 2 is my least favorite.
This is a great example of what often happens in revision. Sometimes I'll only keep one piece of what I wrote the first time. Sometimes I also start all over again. But either way, I'm happier with the second version.
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