This paper titled the whole world is a good paper. It goes into great depth of the subject in which it is talking about. I would give it a 6. Because it is written in a way that many people can relate to. It doesn’t use words that average Americans would not understand. It is written to an audience of diverse people.
I think that the sentences flow well together. There does not seem to be a hesitation or a force in the paragraphs. They examples, using photographs also helped the essay along as well. People are visual learners and observers and that helps greatly to include a photograph. I think also that this is also staying on subject and that it gives you the essay almost in story mode, which is easier to read.
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Thanks for you comment on the images especially. As I photojournalism major, your feedback on this area is important to the class discussion.
By the way, I really enjoy the the My Photography gadget you've added to your blog.
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