Whole World Review.

This paper titled the whole world is a good paper. It goes into great depth of the subject in which it is talking about. I would give it a 6. Because it is written in a way that many people can relate to. It doesn’t use words that average Americans would not understand. It is written to an audience of diverse people.

I think that the sentences flow well together. There does not seem to be a hesitation or a force in the paragraphs. They examples, using photographs also helped the essay along as well. People are visual learners and observers and that helps greatly to include a photograph. I think also that this is also staying on subject and that it gives you the essay almost in story mode, which is easier to read.

Not My Kind Of Community

Community. . . What is a community? By definition it's : a group of people living in a particular local area. I dont know what community I belong to. I may belong to many and just not know it. I know that sometimes i feel as if i do not belong anywhere. Is there a community of loners or people who dont belong in major communities? Is there a place they call home, or a place they can recognize as a community? I dont know, if so, someone give me a map and circle that destination because i am on my way there. I live in Shwoody this year in the Lafollette complex. I guess that in its self is a community. But i dont know if feel as though i belong there. I dont know if I feel like a part of the community. Most of the times its like an out of body experiences and i can see myself standing long a crowd of people here, and i can tell i just dont fit in. Im not the right piece to this puzzle. I dont know what makes a community that much, or what you need to have, i dont even know if i have the right stuff to be in any type of community. But maybe soon i will find out i belonged to one all along. Maybe i just need to stray away from this big pack of communities and make my own.

Fire

Fire Fire Fire! Friday we had to do a time writing test, which for me I thought was going pretty good. But then out of no where there was fire drill. How annoying. every time I'm in the middle of something important there is a fire. Like two times ive been watching glee, there was a fire drill. And this is the second time in English that there is also been a fire drill. It kind of gates annoying, though i know they have to do it, I just wish i didnt have to participate in it. Seriously! My friend Jack said Stu West had one at 4 oclock in the morning and they had to stay in Noyer center thing for like three hours! I dont think I would be able to Handel that! Fire Fire Fire, everywhere I look there is a fire drill. Always in Lafollette not a week goes by that the fire trucks or police man are not here. It is crazy.

Project 3

This has to do with the paper i am writing for project 3.

Mondays Photos

The photos that we got shown to us on Monday, opened my eyes a little. The stories he told and all that. I really wish i could go to Africa and help out, but one im poor, and two i cant take all those shots. I dont have the stomach for needles really. But it is interesting that even back then there was a group out there who was willing to take time out of their lives to help that nation out. It reminded me of what me and my partner talked about in our presentation. I think everyone should somehow show their support for them ,and help that nation out in some way.

Writing Project

The thing that we did with people, by reading out loud our papers, i think actually worked. I could see how my papers sounded. I use to do this when i wrote, Id read it out loud to myself then Id read it out loud to a couple of people. Just to see if they thought my stories were interesting or not. I think it is a really good way to edit and go over a paper.

Library

So i didnt go to the Library but I have been there several times, to get movies. It is pretty big, bigger than my high school library that is for sure. It is very very complicated in there, and I swear I could get lost for hours there. Its so scary in there when you are alone. I felt like the lady in the beginning of GHOST BUSTERS and I thought a ghost was going to get me or something. It is so creepy. But I go there just to get movies most of the time. Which they have a decent array of movies.